As promised, here’s a sample of what’s to come. These are two rough-draft “storyboard” pages done on index cards. What do you suppose is going to happen in Chapter 3? (The two pages are not back-to-back, they come from two different sections of the chapter.)
If you can’t make out the text, I’ve included it below (in the order it appears on each page):
JESSIE: “I’ll consider it, but tell me why.”
KEVIN: “I need to go to the capital.”
JESSIE: “What for?”
KEVIN: “Hmm.”
KEVIN: “Can’t tell.”
JESSIE: “Count me out.”
KEVIN (out of frame): “Remember that I saw someone do that before?”
JESSIE: “Yeah…”
???: “Lord Silver, you’ve come to my aid!”
SILVER(?): “Get lost!…”
SOUND EFFECT: (Pamf)
SILVER(?): “I’m sure Kevin knows why I’m here.”
KEVIN: “…”
SILVER(?): “Hmm?”
???: “?”