{"id":107,"date":"2007-07-03T06:34:56","date_gmt":"2007-07-03T06:34:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/?p=107"},"modified":"2013-09-14T14:24:01","modified_gmt":"2013-09-14T14:24:01","slug":"chapter-3-comparison-part-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/2007\/07\/chapter-3-comparison-part-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Chapter 3 Comparison (Part 2)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>And now, for the second draft image that I showed everyone:<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" style=\"border:1px solid black;\" src=\"http:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/previews\/smodyssey\/images\/ch3_draft_02b.jpg\" alt=\"Page 13 Draft\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" style=\"border:1px solid black;\" src=\"http:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/previews\/smodyssey\/images\/ch3_final_02.jpg\" alt=\"Page 13 Final\" \/><\/p>\n<p>The final version is actually quite close to the original draft. The only major difference here is that the close-up of the stuck-up provincial guard captian was changed to an over-the-shoulder shot of Silver looking down at him. This was done for two reasons: first, it reinforces the idea that Silver was up in a tree. I wanted to make sure that the reader knew where he was in relation to the other characters, and understood why they didn&#8217;t realize that he had been watching the whole time. Second, it&#8217;s just a more interesting shot.<\/p>\n<p>The second panel didn&#8217;t turn out nearly as good as I had hoped; speed lines have never been my strong point. Just thought I should mention that.<\/p>\n<p>Hopefully we&#8217;ll be able to do this again when we get to chapter 4 early next month!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>And now, for the second draft image that I showed everyone: The final version is actually quite close to the original draft. The only major difference here is that the close-up of the stuck-up provincial guard captian was changed to an over-the-shoulder shot of Silver looking down at him. This was done for two reasons: [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[15],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-107","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-swordmaster-odyssey"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/107","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=107"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/107\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":108,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/107\/revisions\/108"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=107"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=107"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.visionriders.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=107"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}